In your analysis, you noted that Cornell's piece was very symmetrical and dark. Yours, though, isn't. Instead, you have that brilliant rose in the bottom left corner- almost looking lit up- and a bird in the top right. Also, your palace in the center is also very lit up and bright, with the pinks and blues combining so that it almost seems purple. It's very out of place in the collage. I'd suggest filtering it so the colors are muted and it blends in with the background better. I really, really like the bright flower in the bottom-left, but it doesn't quite work with the rest of the piece. Maybe add another flower like it in the top-right, instead of the bird?
In your analysis, you noted that Cornell's piece was very symmetrical and dark. Yours, though, isn't. Instead, you have that brilliant rose in the bottom left corner- almost looking lit up- and a bird in the top right. Also, your palace in the center is also very lit up and bright, with the pinks and blues combining so that it almost seems purple. It's very out of place in the collage. I'd suggest filtering it so the colors are muted and it blends in with the background better. I really, really like the bright flower in the bottom-left, but it doesn't quite work with the rest of the piece. Maybe add another flower like it in the top-right, instead of the bird?
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